Nytefyre posted a comment on Saturday 9th March 2013 2:10am

Interesting glimpse into a radical training program. Thanks for posting.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Thursday 8th April 2010 9:55pm

Awesome story!!!!

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 8:49am

Nice work.

GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Wednesday 1st August 2007 9:16am

Nice

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 8th August 2006 1:31am

Very good. It is nice to see an "after the affect" story. Thanks for writing. I am really enjoying the Palladin Universe! Thanks, pms

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Monday 3rd April 2006 4:19am

Another excellent tidbit, and I noticed you never gave away just who the Headmistress actually was. A great many will assume it's Hermione, but that's not an absolute given. Good work!

Aaran St Vines replied:

Always great to her from you, my friend.

I'd say it's a 20% or less chance it's Hermione as the headmistress a hundred years from now, but who knows.

Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 7:06am

Hmmm... Interesting start... or is it done?

Aaran St Vines replied:

These three drabbles or shorts go together just to set the stage.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

David Thacker posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 12:49pm

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

Aaran St Vines replied:

Thanks for the encouragement, for reading, and for reviewing.

Cheers.

freakyfinger posted a comment on Thursday 16th March 2006 10:25am

So who exactly is the headmaster?

Aaran St Vines replied:

I don't know.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 12th March 2006 1:42pm

I just saw your new site here show up, so I'm new to your work, but the descriptions sound very interesting.

This piece is certainly well written and is a good hook, but doesn't seem to really stand alone. I assume that other two drabbles in this sequence will help fill it out. I look forward to finding out.

Aaran St Vines replied:

Yes, these three drabbles or shorts go together introduce ideas that will make more sense as I go along.

Thanks for your interest and kind review.

Arkeus posted a comment on Saturday 11th March 2006 1:34pm

very good :-)
now i just have to read the otheer two. you are making a solid universe there.

Aaran St Vines replied:

Thanks for your interest and your kind words.

Jon Rosebaugh posted a comment on Thursday 9th March 2006 1:01pm

Interesting reading, but I have a few corrections to make:

who went threw the Paladin Program

should be "who went through the Paladin Program"

he followed the proscribed guidelines of the day

should be "he followed the prescribed guidelines of the day"
proscribed means "forbidden by law", prescribed means "the rule for how things are done"

Sorry if this seems pedantic; I'm just used to very high standards here at FFA.

Aaran St Vines replied:

Thanks for the review and the error-catching.

I've made those changes and others.

Cheers.

Crys posted a comment on Thursday 9th March 2006 12:22pm

> full VR5 reality deck sims

Do you read Shadowrun, perchance?

Interesting drabble. Gives an interesting overview.

Though I thought one of them mentioned Ron was at 6'4" . . .

Anyway, I'm curious who the speaker is. I'd bet on Susan, myself.

Aaran St Vines replied:

Thanks for the review.

I've never heard of Shadowrun.

I haven't decided who the speaker is - not sure if I will, either.