"Great Scott, Potter, This is War!"
Chapter Ten - Sanctuary
By Aaran St Vines
Reviews
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Tuesday 31st October 2006 11:34am for Chapter Ten - Sanctuary
Great chapter! Many thanks for sharing it with us.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 6:02am for Chapter Ten - Sanctuary
The way the attack came in the hospital so soon after Molly's words of comfort was brilliant. Excellent chapter. I liked the way it was Steph who shook some sense into the lot of them. Father Martin is an interesting character. More please.
Glurb posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 6:30pm for Chapter Ten - Sanctuary
That is high quality material, as usual actually. (I even wonder if I really need to bother pointing that out, that's so obvious)
I particularly enjoyed the explanation you gave about Occlumency, and the way you can hide your thoughts to a legilimens ; it was brilliant.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Judy L posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 9:05am for Chapter Ten - Sanctuary
Your updates are always worth waiting for. The conflict between the Arithmantic Spell Crafters and the Spell Mongers reminds me of my own mis-perceptions of the differences between MD's and DO's - or the other salesmen's view of Professor Hill in The Music Man. I always look forward to the physical science and the philosophic/spiritual wisdom in your stories.
Thank you for brightening my day.
zac posted a comment on Thursday 26th October 2006 4:38pm for Chapter Ten - Sanctuary
Such a beautiful blessing and so relevent to Harry's situation and life.
chris mudge posted a comment on Thursday 26th October 2006 1:31pm for Chapter Ten - Sanctuary
Very nice chapter, but I am wondering what the point is about posting two identical stories? The diff between this and Granger is so slight as to be nearly non-existent. I know that you said that in your disclaimer but it still seems kind of pointless.
brat1234 posted a comment on Thursday 26th October 2006 12:28pm for Chapter Ten - Sanctuary
This chapter is bril.
Keep up the good work
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Thursday 26th October 2006 11:37am for Chapter Ten - Sanctuary
Great update...and of course I *do* like the little H/G moment there! :-)
Love the spell-mongering explanation; hopefully the others can get their heads out of their bottoms long enough to think rationally about it. Spell-mongering is dark just like parsletongue is dark. Gurk. (speaking of parsletongue and dark, have you read the story Herpetology? It's by Persephone Kore and Andrea13; found on Schnoogle: http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/andrea13_and_persephone_kore/herpetology01.html
It's great.
Anyway, I like your fleshing out of Fr Martin, and the prayer and advice are marvelous. The blessing of Aaron is one of my favorite Biblical prayers.
Cheers,
CP
Michael Olbrich posted a comment on Thursday 26th October 2006 6:09am for Chapter Ten - Sanctuary
Both versions say: "My friend Hermione Granger gave me this album of photos from my years at Hogwarts."
That should be Ginny for "Great Scott..", right?
Tracey1 posted a comment on Tuesday 21st November 2006 6:52am for Chapter Ten - Sanctuary