"Great Scott, Potter, This is War!"
Chapter Six - An Offer Vernon Can't Refuse
By Aaran St Vines
Reviews
saugart posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 8:40pm for Chapter Six - An Offer Vernon Can't Refuse
You write:
It has been a route of dementors.You mean the identically-sounding word: rout .
Good for you for the story and for pimping for Makers of Fine Wands... . It's certainly a worthwhile tale.
Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 2:03am for Chapter Six - An Offer Vernon Can't Refuse
Interesting thought: The timing of those phone calls is WAY too perfect. What if it wasn't them calling at all? AD is more than powerful/subtle/manipulative enough to pull such a thing off with nobody the wiser.
Tonks's clothing changed with her? Uh . . . I hate to nitpick, but that isn't canon, is it?
Anyway, to end this with a positive: Another great chapter! On to the next one :)
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 16th April 2006 4:41am for Chapter Six - An Offer Vernon Can't Refuse
Nice chapter, thanks.
I'm surprised that Dobby's the one to introduce him to Spell Mongery, but I like the way you've set up the relationship between Dobby & Harry so far.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 14th August 2008 12:33pm for Chapter Six - An Offer Vernon Can't Refuse